You’ve heard the phrase: show the reader, don’t tell them. In the first example, we’re riding along with the character, seeing what she’s seeing, feeling what she’s feeling. By the end of the paragraph, we’re reaching for a gin and tonic!
For those of you familiar with M E Fuller’s Worlds and Words, you’ll notice a dramatic change in look to this page. The original website, mefuller.com (which now points here, to mefullerwords.com) disappeared into the bowels of the former web host company’s server farm and appears to be irretrievable. (Note: if you use an old link and it launches a […]